Steal the shape, not the sentence
Watch ten videos in your niche that held you. Write down the first spoken line and what was on screen. You will see a small set of shapes: "Stop doing X," "I tried X so you do not have to," "The reason your X looks like Y," "Watch this before you buy X."
Then write yours with your actual subject. A hook about bitrate is not a hook about mindset. Say the noun.
- Name the person: new streamer, Reel editor, small YouTube channel.
- Name the pain in their words, not yours.
- Put motion or a face in frame one. A static title card is a swipe.
- Cut the warm-up. If the first line can move to second, delete the first.