Tell it in the order a stranger can follow
Hook is why they should care now. Context is the minimum they need. Conflict is what went wrong or what was hard. Payoff is the result, the lesson, or the punchline. If you start with context, you are making them wait for a reason.
Problem, journey, transformation is the teaching version. The problem is theirs, not your origin story. The journey is the steps. The transformation is what is different after. Skip the journey and you have a quote. Skip the transformation and you have a vlog.